He's The One- Rough Cut

He's The One- Rough Cut from Jemma Goulds on Vimeo.

Feedback on Rough Cut:

"Really good. The soundtrack went with the voice over because it was jolly. The echo could be heard during the voice over." -Josephine

"Instead of walking down the stairs, there should be a group of people laughing together and then Lisa walking alone." -Myrin

"Music and titles worked well together. Opening credits were too long compared to the film." -Sophie

"The target audience was made apparent. You could have included speech bubbles for when she said "OMG" The camera angles were excellent but re-do the voice over and lower the music during some points." -Miss Goulds

"There we great chemistry between the characters." -Joanna